Archive for February, 2007

A devlishly vicious circle.

Vicious CircleTitle: Vicious Circle
Author: Mike Carey
Publisher: Orbit
Price: £7.99
Published: Oct 2006

Mike Carey is more widely known as a comic book writer – and for exploring the area of the occult in the comics Lucifer and Hellblazer (both available from DC Comics) He also writes about superheroes. He’s somehow found time to write a series of novels starting with The Devil You Know. Vicious Circle is the follow-up to that and takes us through another case of the exorcist Felix Castor.

Mike takes us to a London where the dead are no longer staying in the shadows. They are rising in great numbers and there is even an Act going through Parliament aimed at giving the dead legal status.

With this backdrop Castor takes on a request from the parents of a kidnapped girl. There is only one problem – she’s dead and ghosts can’t just be picked up and pocketed. Not that stops Castor taking on the case – the mystery and the grief of the parents persuades him – though the money may help too.

Mike does plot very well. The story is focused and well planned. The other thing he’s good at is hiding the twists and turns until the several ‘d’oh’ moments that occur. Everything moves along at a page-turning pace.

What is frustrating is the need to supply plot seems to leave Felix and the other characters getting less development time than they deserve, because Carey paints them so well you do want to spend more time with them. But as this is a first person tale there are perfectly good reasons why our focus can’t shift to the secondary characters too much. The only way would be to have Felix in their presence but being with them too long might give stuff away before everything is fully set-up.

Instead, you get to see him out and about, ducking and diving, exploring the seedy world that attracts his services. So you don’t notice this lack of progress until the conclusion, which itself makes you wish you knew Castor a little more.

Throughout the book Felix remains a bit of a mystery – but that’s how it should be. As is the way with all detectives – you see enough of their home life to make them human but not enough to shift the focus away from whatever they happen to be investigating.

Even though it’s not mentioned in the cover VC has all the markings of the second book of a trilogy. Character and storylines started in the first book play an important part here and the anticipation is that they will feature in the next one as well.

Whole heartedly recommended but read The Devl You Know first.

Demonstrating Principles

101 Reasons to Stop Writing: A Rare Personal Interlude …
You know, I wasn’t planning to demonstrate any of the Reasons …

This post on 101 Reasons… really made me smile. It is also a wonderful blog. Please check it out if you have chance.

Epic Moive

Just don’t.

How to say this

Anyone who talks to me regulary, hopefully, will know that I’m not the most tactful person, but I’m going to try.

A few posts ago I was talking about Heaven’s Delight, which I guilted myself into ordering. And I don’t know how else to say this but I shouldn’t have felt guilty and should have saved the £6.40.

It’s billed as a romantic comedy. Now this I can’t confirm this because I’ve not read it all the way through, and there is no way that I’m going to. At least not yet.

The whole thing started because I was incensed that in their Guardian posting Niraj Kapur had failed to mention that Heavan’s Delight was self-published. Now I have nothing against self-publishing. In fact I think it’s a wonderful idea - Bill Liveridge of PundyHouse is planning on doing just that. I help run a company, which offers self-publishing services, and no this isn’t a post about how we could do it better. But self-publishing isn’t for everybody.

And isn’t something to do without getting the basics right. Using Bill as an example - Bill is having his novel proof read by some good people. I’d never offer my proof reading services, as even though I know what the errors are, I can’t spot them from twenty passes like the best proof readers I know. They’d hopefully spot things like ‘4gb’ instead of ‘4GB, as on Heaven’s Delight’s first page.

But things like that don’t stop me reading. What does is bad writing, now this only my opinion and you may disagree. And if you want to make an informed opinion you may want to buy a copy, but I’d suggest waiting until after it’s republished by a more tradional publisher, if the reports of the author prove succesful.

I am actually disapointed because after ordering it I was prepared to be entertained and to eat humble pie and say what a wonderful novel it is. I’d be lying if I did that now I’ve tried to read it.
This novel simply disregards the first rule of writing:

Show. Don’t Tell!

Oh, you can download a sample chapter:

http://www.heavensdelight.co.uk/files/first-chapter.pdf

Is this just me being overly cruel? Or am I hopefully just being realistic about the quality of what I’m reading?

I should add that God and the Devil seems to play a big part, but I’m can’t report how succesful this based on the whole book, but from what I’ve seen - they aren’t handled that well.

Next…

BBC NEWS | Entertainment | Debut novelist wins Costa award

BBC NEWS | Entertainment | Debut novelist wins Costa award
Penney, aged 37 and a screenwriter, won the “first book” award before scooping the top £25,000 prize.

Well that’s something you don’t see everyday. There is hope it seems. And they want to charge people for using the British Library! Shame on them.

Locus Magazine’s Recommended First Novels

Locus Online: Locus Magazine’s Recommended Reading: 2006
This recommended reading list, published in Locus Magazine’s February 2007 issue, is a consensus by Locus editors and reviewers…

The section I headed straight for was:

First novels:

 

    * The Blade Itself, Joe Abercrombie (Gollancz; Pyr)

    * A Shadow in Summer, Daniel Abraham (Tor)

    * The Patron Saint of Plagues, Barth Anderson (Bantam Spectra)

    * Crystal Rain, Tobias S. Buckell (Tor)

    * Scar Night, Alan Campbell (Tor UK; Bantam Spectra)

    * The Glass Books of the Dream Eaters, Gordon Dahlquist (Bantam; Viking UK)

    * The Stolen Child, Keith Donohue (Cape; Doubleday)

    * The Green Glass Sea, Ellen Klages (Viking)

    * The Lies of Locke Lamora, Scott Lynch (Gollancz; Bantam Spectra)

    * Temeraire: His Majesty’s Dragon / Throne of Jade / Black Powder War (Del Rey; Voyager), as Temeraire: In the Service of the King (SFBC)

    * The Burning Girl, Holly Phillips (Prime Books)

    * Summer of the Apocalypse, James Van Pelt (Fairwood Press)

Looks like a good list to check out.